“Hello. My name is Blanca Jara and I am a staff writer for the News section of The Beachcomber for the second nine weeks. Please leave me a note as a comment to this page if you have any information for a story I am writing.”
“Hello. My name is Blanca Jara and I am a staff writer for the News section of The Beachcomber for the second nine weeks. Please leave me a note as a comment to this page if you have any information for a story I am writing.”
29 responses so far ↓
robertar2008 // October 24, 2007 at 5:22 pm
Hey,
This is Roberta, the News Editor. Anyway, I want you to write about the new graduation requirements for those students entering high school in 2007-2008.
You can interview Mr. Robins, the AP of Cirriculum, Dr. Sidener, who will be able to tell you who else to talk to., and any freshman students and what they think. You can also do research on www2.dadeschools.net, and just write about the new requirements, why they were implemented, what the effect of these new requirements are on students and how the students feel about the new requirements.
Please have this done by Thursday, October 25, the latest Friday.
If you can’t get all the quotes from administrators for time reasons, then please have it by the end of the day MONDAY!
We’re working on a really tight schedule to get the print version out!
Thanks.
robertar2008 // October 29, 2007 at 6:00 pm
Hey Blanca…
Just reminding you to please have your article up by 6:OO TONIGHT!!!
Otherwise, it will be late and I would have to leave you the following note:
Hey Blanca, it’s the News Editor and…
YOU’RE IN BIG TROUBLE!
The deadline for your article was on MONDAY, but I don’t even see so much as a first draft from you! Mr. Weiss told me that whoever doesn’t have their article in by now is in big trouble. The absolute final deadline to have the articles published in the paper is WEDNESDAY, but we may not meet that deadline now because YOU didn’t turn in your work. Even if you were to post your article to your blog on Wednesday, it would be too late because we were supposed to already have the articles edited, proofread and with sidebars!
Please, next time, stick to the deadline. The fate of a newspaper depends on it.
But still turn it in ASAP!!!! Like, NOW!!!!
Thanks,
Roberta XOXO
sarab2010 // October 31, 2007 at 5:13 pm
Hi Bianca,
I am Robertas asst for today and She would like a meeting with you on Fri at 12:20, she will meet you in front of the main office. Thank you!
robertar2008 // November 9, 2007 at 3:03 am
Hello News Staff Writers –
We got the first issue out. Whoo! The next print issue is supposed to be out around the middle of January. Before then, we still need to come up with ideas for the online version. This is the hard thing about being a news writer – you can’t really “plan” news. Since we can’t predict the future, it’s kind of hard to pull news stories from out of the air. So what we need to do is get some leads or “beats” about what’s going on around school. I’m going to talk to Mr. Weiss and people in the office on Monday so that we can get some news stories to write about.
Construction is kind of “played out”, as is the FCAT. We already wrote about Staph, and there are no other big scares at school.
There’s going to be an Attendance Pep Rally on the 16th. That’s news that can go up on the site, maybe. And someone could write about the Miami Beach election results.
Anyway, I did come up with three ideas for the January issue, you can check them out on my blog. Maybe they’ll give you inspiration and you guys can work on an investigative journalism piece of your own about a school policy or something like that.
But don’t worry, guys! We’ll get out of this rut. I’ll write you again on Monday, and hopefully I’ll have some leads on potential news stories.
Roberta
P.S. Sorry about the length of this note. I realize that it’s long and I sometimes babble.
robertar2008 // November 9, 2007 at 3:04 am
that square is supposed to be a
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robertar2008 // November 11, 2007 at 4:08 am
Hey guys-
I came up with a news story for Alessia since it ties in with an article she already wrote. I’m going to look for more leads on Monday, but still post up the ideas that you came up with last Friday, and we’ll go from there.
Thanks, guys!
Roberta
robertar2008 // November 13, 2007 at 6:56 pm
Hey Blanca,
I have a news story for you! You can write about the City of Miami Beach elections. Recounts or something are being held on November 20th, and a lot of the candidates are scary looking l0l. Ask Mr. Weiss about this, and maybe you and Alessia can work together since you’re both writing about elections (although they’re two different elections).
Roberta
robertar2008 // November 15, 2007 at 4:00 pm
Yes!
Drop Out Rates specifically at Beach High is great!
YAY!!!
Great job coming up with ideas! And yea, Amanda can do the mayor’s election.
robertar2008 // November 15, 2007 at 4:05 pm
Sorry, I meant to add more to the previous message.
Anyway, if the DFYIT canned drive is going on now, then that would be a good thing to write about, and you can the first draft by monday or tuesday.
Let me know! And also, you can e-mail me your number to collegeboundberta@gmail.com
And again, great job coming up with ideas! YAY NEWS SECTION
robertar2008 // November 15, 2007 at 4:25 pm
Hey guys, check out my blog for a NEWS SECTION update. I would post it up to your blogs, but I feel that I’ve taken over your “Leave A Note Page” with super long messages l0l!
robertar2008 // November 21, 2007 at 6:45 pm
I’m pretty sure that the holiday drives are going on now, seeing as the holidays are coming up. Please have the article in ASAP, it was supposed to be in by Tuesaday (yesterday) and I still need to work on your article with you and edit it.
I’m writing about how Beach High is trying to become a Title I school but anyway…I need your article ASAP, please!!!!
Oh, and I need your number! Please post it up here or e-mai it to me to collegeboundberta@gmail.com !
HAPPY THANKSGIVING!
robertar2008 // November 28, 2007 at 2:53 am
Hey…check out my blog for story ideas and “Note Update” #2!!!! PLEASE GO NOW, IT’S CRUCIAL THAT YOU DO!!!!
Oh and Blanca, I still need your number. Maybe you can give it to Mr. Weiss to give to me…?
robertar2008 // November 30, 2007 at 6:07 am
Hey guys…another Note Update! Please look. Thanks.
And thanks for the contact info! I’ll text you later so you’ll have my number and you can contact me if you need me.
robertar2008 // December 2, 2007 at 5:25 am
Hey Blanca,
I sent you a text in reply to your last post to me on Friday. Did you get it? Anyway, which comments should I delete l0l? You and Carlos leave funny ones.
Anyway again, don’t worry, I will be more specific in what I want you guys to do on Tuesday or Wednesday. I will giveyou guys all of the info later o that’s it’s easier for you to get a head start.
Don’t sweat it. I will let you know the specifics soon. And if you need me, 786-718-9466.
Roberta
P.S Thanks for your dedication!
robertar2008 // December 3, 2007 at 4:31 am
Great job, Blanca! I edited your -FY-IT article, it’s on my blog. You made my job easy. Your writing skills have really improved. I just substituted some words to clean the article up a bit. The quotes wrote the story and you ended the article very nicely. Yay!
robertar2008 // December 4, 2007 at 1:26 am
NEWS STAFF -
Check out my blog for another Note Update and YOUR ASSIGNMENTS!!!!
WHOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Roberta
carlosm2010 // December 15, 2007 at 7:42 pm
QUESTIONS
1) how do you feel about the construction?
2)does the transition affect your teaching?
3)do you feel it is your responsability to move?
4)do you like the new building?
5)are you aware that the district hired 3 movers?
6)has it been a chalange to move?
7)do you feel you should be paid for moving yourself
JUSTIN CORMIER
1)I think its very constructive, they’re building a building and it’s nice
2)I teach some times [pause] it affects students a little bit, i was gonna let them use their text books today and now they cant and i hered im gona be in a closet
3)Ohh… i like playing a role in it cause its my stuff and i dont really want other people touching it (will they find something you dont want to share?) probably
4)i don’t know i’ve never been there
5) i hered it was 30 [hahaha] 3 is not verey many
6)i dont know, for many years my girl friend has lived here, girtrude, and when i put here into a box she was very upset but their are benefits to putting your girlfriend into a box
7)i will take money, am i getting paid? im making students do everything
MEYERCORD
1)do you want to move? “well …is this on [laugh] i really dont have a choice cause they are demoliting the buildings, im not given a choice
2)where are you going? “id be moved to…well originaly to the 300 wing cause thats were the scholars academy is but they were giving me a romm with a darkroom in it(photography) and lots of chemicals so now im going to the 400 wing. obviously id prefer to be in a nice clean new building close to the parking lot [laugh] being 7 months pregnant but ….
3)are you being helped, considering ur pregnancy? um…some students volenteered
4)should you be paid? um if they wanted to offer to pay us to come over brake to give us a chance to settle into new calssromms that would be nice
robertar2008 // December 24, 2007 at 3:36 am
Guys…
Where are your articles? Sunday is practically over and now we look bad because I first told Alex she would have them Saturday morning, then Sunday. Could you please e-mail them to collegeboundberta@gmail.com if you can’t get them up here?
Thanks, and have a nice break!
robertar2008 // January 15, 2008 at 3:05 am
Yes! Do the article please! I like it…! Will let you know the deadline later
Also, whatever happened to the articles that I was supposed to get before the break?
alicias2008 // January 25, 2008 at 12:59 am
Hey Blanca…..Well my name is Alicia Sanchez and I’m the opinion section editor. I’m very glad that you have decided to become a part of the opinion section staff writer and I’m looking forward to working with you and making the opinion section better. As you may know communication is a big help so here’s my number 786-355-2365 in case you need help with your piece or have any questions concerning the paper. Please leave me a note with your number and also some story ideas for your next piece……as you may know Weiss is giving everyone deadlines so its very important to start working…….Thank you
alicias2008 // January 31, 2008 at 12:05 am
Hey Blanca, Please post your article on your blog instead of placing it as an attachment because I dont have Word at home……Please get back at me as soon as possible…..Thank you
amaliar2011 // January 31, 2008 at 4:42 pm
Draft=missing. Where is it?
alicias2008 // February 5, 2008 at 11:31 pm
Hey Blanca, well I edited everyone’s first draft so far except yours because you didn’t print it out. So far your piece seems a little too much focused on yourself, I realize that its your first draft and you still need to gather information. Maybe you can focus on the delay to have the computers up and running (it could be the angle for your piece). If you need more direction call me or leave me a note……..Thank you
hitides // February 11, 2008 at 5:26 pm
Blanca… Where are your article ideas?
hitides // March 5, 2008 at 4:57 pm
Again, I ask – where are your article ideas???
alicias2008 // March 17, 2008 at 10:07 pm
Hey Blanca, well even though I like the community service piece, I don’t want you to write about anything that you don’t feel comfortable writing about so you can think of something else or you can take a new angle on the community hour piece. You can change the angle to your opinion on wether or not you think students should not be able to graduate unless they have their community service hours complete…….I’m sure you can think of something better if you don’t like this idea but just let me know soon enough so I know what to expect from you……….Thanks
alicias2008 // March 20, 2008 at 12:38 am
Hay Blanca, I have edited your piece so look for it in the file box, I have written some comments……..Thank you
margaretc09 // April 9, 2008 at 1:54 am
Hey Blanca,
I’m glad youre part of the features section! I generally classify features as anything from profiles (on clubs, teachers, students, otherwise cool people, etc.) to anything that isn’t really timely-trends, things going on in the city, hobbies, etc. It’s a really fun topic becuase there is so much to write about. Since no one posted ideas, I am assigning them. This one will require a bit of research, but I don’t think it will be too hard. I’m sure a lot of teachers, students and administrators did something really cool for their spring break. Your job is to find them and talk to them. Make sure they’re legit interesting, not something like “I went to the beach a few times, i hung out with my friends and i got a new dog”. Find people who went somewhere really fascinating, or saved sea turtles, etc. I think it would be really cool if you could fit an administrator in. My phone number is (305)332-0146, and my email is margaret.cohn@gmail.com. Please message or email me your contact information, and please let me know if there is anyway I can help you =)
margaretc09 // May 12, 2008 at 5:42 pm
Hey Blanca,
I have to see a first draft of the article on Dr. Sidener’s intern. I would love to get this published if you can get it done in time. Thursday at the end of class your final draft is due.